Corrected by Lisa 

June 17th, 2018

6/17/2018

 

I went to the San Mateo County Fair with my husband and my friends in Japanese language exchange meet up .

There were lots of things to see in the fair.

 

First of all, We went to the attractions area.

There were many attractions. It seems very fun!

We bought a few tickets and tried someon some rides.

We got on an attraction like a disk.

It circled around at a fast speed and we stuck to the wall with centrifugal force.

※centrifugal force(センチュリファゴlフォrス):遠心力
It is not in Japan We don't have in Japan, so it was very interesting.

All the all attractions were temporary and I was surprised at that.

I thought that moving them and installation installing them seemed to be tough.
※installation(インスタ(テ)レイション):設置

 

Next, we ate a deep fry.

Do you know deep fry?

Deep frying is a cooking method in which food is submerged in hot fat, most commonly oil, rather than the shallow oil used in conventional frying, done in a frying pan. (by wiki.)

※主語+動詞+目的語+in which(関係代名詞)+主語+動詞

※submerge(サブマrジ):〔液体中に〕~を沈める[沈没させる]

※rather than(ゥrアththェエン):~よりはむしろ、かえって

※shallow(シャァlォw):浅い

※conventional(ケンヴェンチナl):従来の

I ate deep-fried oreo.

It was crispy on the outside and chewy on the inside.

※chewy(チウイ):もちもちの

It was more delicious than I thought.

 

I ate Big Bubba's Bad BBQ skewers for lunch.

It was so big that it was just good to divide by bettween two people.

All American food is very big.

 

In the afternoon, I watched animals and looked at the exhibits.

The County Fair was very fun because various things could be seen.

But I felt it was a little expensive to charge $ 12 for parking lot and $ 15 for entrance.

There were lots of attractions, so it might be more fun if you go with children.

 

 

-----Before correction

June 17th, 2018

6/17/2018

 

I went to the San Mateo County Fair with my husband and my friends in Japanese language exchange meet up .

There were lots of things to see in the fair.

 

First of all, We went to the attractions area.

There were many atractions. It seems very fun!

We bought a few tickets and try someone.

We got on an attraction like a disk.

It circled around at a fast speed and we stuck to the wall with centrifugal force.

※centrifugal force(センチュリファゴlフォrス):遠心力
It is not in Japan, so it was very interesting.

The all attraction was temporary and I was surprised at that.

I thought that moving them and installation them seemed to be tough.
※installation(ンスタ(テ)レイション):設置

 

Next, we ate a deep fly.

Do you know deep fly?

Deep frying is a cooking method in which food is submerged in hot fat, most commonly oil, rather than the shallow oil used in conventional frying, done in a frying pan. (by wiki.)

※主語+動詞+目的語+in which(関係代名詞)+主語+動詞

※submerge(ブマrジ):〔液体中に〕~を沈める[沈没させる]

※rather than(ゥrアththェエン):~よりはむしろ、かえって

※shallow(シャァlォw):浅い

※conventional(ケンヴェンチナl):従来の

I ate deep-fried oreo.

It was crispy on the outside and chewy on the inside.

※chewy(ウイ):もちもちの

It was more delicious than I thought.

 

I ate Big Bubba's Bad BBQ skewers for lunch.

It was so big that it was just good to divide by two people.

All American food is very big.

 

In the afternoon, I watched animals and looked the exhibits.

County Fair was very fun because various things could be seen.

But I felt it was a little expensive to charge $ 12 for parking lot and $ 15 for entrance.

There were lots of attractions, so it might be more fun if you go with children.