Corrected by Lisa 

I went to the park near google canpas campus for watching fireworks.

My husband's friend recommended to him the park witch which are is near google canpas campus.

So my husband and I went the park at 8pm.

 

※witchは魔女

 

I laid a sheet on the glasses grass and rielaxed on that.

Everyone looked so fun! They were speaking and playing with their family or friends. 

Some people played with handheld fireworks.

 

I've thought fireworks started at 9pm so because my husband said that.

But it didn't start that until 9:30pm.

It I was so cold because I accidentry accidentally wear wore just t-shirt and hoodie.

The children sitting my next sheet have blankets next to my sheet had blankets

I was very envious of them. 

 

※ envious of(ンヴィエソヴ)

 

Finaly, fireworks started at 9:45pm.

It was so fun!

I was very exscited.

But it finished after about for 15 minutes.

I felt a few little sad so because I had been waiting for it since 8am.

But I enjoyed the atmosphere, I felt good to go glad I went.

 

I got home and took a hot shower.

It was a niceday.

 

 

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I went to the park near google canpas for watching fireworks.

My husband's friend recommended him the park witch are near google canpas.

So my husband and I went the park 8pm.

 

I laid a sheet on the glasses and rilaxed on that.

Everyone looked so fun! They were speaking and playing with their family or friends. 

Some people played handheld fireworks.

 

I've thought fireworks started at 9pm so my husband said that.

But it didn't start that 9:30pm.

It was so cold because I accidentry wear just t-shirt and hoodie.

The children sitting my next sheet have blankets.

I was very envious them. 

 

Finaly, fireworks started at 9:45pm.

It was so fun!

I was very exsited.

But it finished about for 15 minutes.

I felt a few sad so I had been waiting it since 8am.

But I enjoyed the atmosphere, I felt good to go.

 

I got home and took a hot shower.

It was niceday.